Question

14．假如你是李英，在即將畢業(yè)之際，你的英語老師Mr Smith要求你們每人給他寫一封英文書信作紀(jì)念，信的內(nèi)容包括下列三方面內(nèi)容：
1、你對Mr Smith的整體印象；（kind，warm-hearted，helpful，hardworking …）
2、簡述一次經(jīng)歷或一件事；（help，give up，keep…）
3、你的感受或愿望．（thankful，lucky，proud…）
（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其字?jǐn)?shù)不計入短文內(nèi)；括號里的英文提示供選用）
Dear Mr Smith，
How are you？It's a pity that I'm leaving this school soon．At the moment I really want to say"Thank you very much．"              ．
Best wishes to you!
                                                       Yours Li Ying．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
You are always working hard and try to help us when we are in trouble．
句中涉及短語有"be always doing sth 總是做某事"、"try to do sth 盡力做某事"、"be in trouble 處于困境"．這句話意為：你總是辛勤工作，當(dāng)我們有困難的時候盡力幫我們．
高分句型二：
Little by little，I've become interested in English and I'm now good at it．
句中涉及的短語有"little by little 逐漸地"、"become interested in sth  對…變得有興趣"、"be good at…擅長…"．這句話意為：逐漸地，我開始對英語感興趣了．現(xiàn)在我很擅長英語．

解答 Dear Mr Smith，
  How are you？It's a pity that I'm leaving this school soon．At the moment I really want to say"Thank you very much．"You have done a lot for us since you came to our school．You are always working hard and try to help us when we are in trouble．【高分句型一】（表達(dá)感激）
I still remember，when I began to learn English，I found it too difficult．No matter how hard I tried，I still couldn't do well in it and almost gave it up．As soon as you found my problem，you had a talk with me about how to learn English well．Since then you have kept helping me．Little by little，I've become interested in English and I'm now good at it．【高分句型二】（回憶舊事）
  I think I am so lucky to become one of your students．I've learned a lot from you．I will try to help others when they are in trouble．I hope that you can stay in China longer and have more Chinese students．（表達(dá)祝福）
  Best wishes to you!
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Ying

點(diǎn)評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．