Question

4．暑假即將來臨．你班同學們正在討論假期計劃，提出了不同的看法．有的想和家人外出旅游，有的想和同學一起打球．你有什么看法呢？請你根據(jù)你自己的實際情況談談你的打算和想法．
提示詞語：the summer holiday，come，your classmates，talk about，travel，play，think，do
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Though it's good for health，it's not my favourite．
句中"Though it's good for health"為"though"引導的讓步狀語從句；句中短語有"be good for…對…有好處"．這句話意為：盡管那對健康有好處，但不是我的最愛．
高分句型二：
In this way I can not only increase my knowledge but also do something for my parents．
句中涉及的短語有："in this way 以這種方式"、"not only…but also…不但…而且…"．這句話意為：以這種方式，我不僅可以提高我的成績，還可以為我父母做點兒事．

解答 The summer holiday is coming．Our classmates are talking about what to do during the holiday．（開篇點題）
Some are going out for travelling with their families．Of course they will spend more money．Some are going to play ball games with their classmates．Though it's good for health，it's not my favourite．【高分句型一】（同學的計劃）
I think it's much better to stay at home．I can do many things as I like，such as reading，watching TV and helping my parents with the housework．In this way I can not only increase my knowledge but also do something for my parents．【高分句型二】（我的想法）

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．