Question

19．6．Write at least 60words about the topic"My Dream Life of Senior High School"．（以"我向往的高中生活"為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格．首句已給，不記入60個(gè)詞．）
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分．）
Use the following questions as a guide．（下列問題供參考）
•What senior high school life do you like？
•What do you hope to do in the senior high school？
•What kind of teachers and friends do you expect to have？
You may begin your passage with：
My dream senior high school life is …
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
And I also expect to make a friend that I could talk with him heart by heart．我也期望交到一個(gè)可以交心的朋友．
that作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾friend．
【高分句型二】
I'm looking forward to my life of senior high school我期待我高中的生活．
look forward to期望，后加名詞，代詞或者動(dòng)名詞．

解答 My life of senior high school will certainly be busy，but I hope it will be a pleasant and colorful one．（喜歡什么樣的高中）Of course，first of all，I want to get more knowledge，especially on Math and English．Secondly，I'd like to join a club or a society（打算做什么）．Classmates and I will take part in many interesting activities．However，teachers and friends are also an important part in my study life．Good teachers may affect my study a lot．And I also expect to make a friend that I could talk with him heart by heart．【高分句型一】（期望什么樣的老師和朋友）I'm looking forward to my life of senior high school．【高分句型二】

點(diǎn)評 提綱類作文的要點(diǎn)都給了出來，在寫作的時(shí)候需要使用合適的連接詞把這些要點(diǎn)連接成一個(gè)整體．同時(shí)注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)．