Question

 

     假設2008年2月12日是你父親的生日，下面三幅圖描繪的是你給父親買完禮物后乘坐地鐵回家時經歷的一件事。請根據圖示，用英語寫一篇日記記敘這件事，并談談自己的感受。

注意：

    1. 詞數不少于100；

2. 可適當加入細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：

地鐵（列車）----- subway train

February 12^th, 2008

 

 

Answer 1

解析：

寫作要點：1. 本文的命題形式為漢語提示+三副圖畫，記敘+議論，體裁為日記，時態(tài)以一般過去式為主。

                2．敘述事情發(fā)生的時間、地點

3. 為爸爸買生日禮物

                4．買完生日禮物后，坐地鐵回家

                5．見老奶奶提著重物，找不到座位

                6．為老奶奶讓座

                7．看到老奶奶笑容，倍受鼓舞，決心以后更多的幫助別人

      One Possible Version:

      Februay 12 th,2008

          The day is my Dad’s birthday. This afternoon I went to the shopping

      center downtown, and bought a present for him. Then I took the subway

      train home. Sitting on the train, I thought my dad would be very happy

      when he saw the present. At the next station, an old lady with two heavy

      bags got on the train and stood in front of me. She looked tired. I

      hesitated for a moment, and then offered my seat to her. The old lady

      thanked me a lot and sat down. Seeing her smile,I felt happy. I will

      always be ready to help others in the future.