Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，簡(jiǎn)單描述一下1923年發(fā)生在日本的地震。

1. 地震于1923年發(fā)生在日本橫濱市(Yokohama)；

2. 當(dāng)時(shí)人們正在睡覺，并不知道地震發(fā)生；

3. 大量的房屋、建筑物倒塌，水電供應(yīng)中斷；

4. 有140,000多人喪生，還有很多受傷者和無(wú)家可歸者；

5. 是歷史上最嚴(yán)重的地震之一。

要求：

1. 短文必須包括要點(diǎn)中的所有內(nèi)容；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容連貫；

3. 詞數(shù)：100左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

In 1923, a big earthquake hit the city of Yokohama, a city in Japan. It happened at night when most people were sleeping. When the earthquake happened, it seemed that the world was at an end. Houses and tall buildings fell down. Water and electricity were cut off. There were fires and smoke everywhere. In a few seconds the whole city was almost destroyed and lay in ruins. The number of people who were killed reached more than 140,000. Besides, a large number of people were injured and lost their homes. It was one of the biggest earthquakes in history.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)的寫作。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)寫描述一下1923年發(fā)生在日本的地震的情況，要點(diǎn)包括地震的細(xì)節(jié)，具體內(nèi)容提綱中都已經(jīng)給出來(lái)了，寫作時(shí)要把要點(diǎn)都包括進(jìn)去，不要有遺漏，審題時(shí)注意本文使用的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。如范文里面的When the earthquake happened, it seemed that the world was at an end 和In a few seconds the whole city was almost destroyed and lay in ruins.還有要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把文章串聯(lián)起來(lái)：如besides等等。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類短文寫作。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，詞匯句型的選用，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。