Question

1．一家知名外債企業(yè)準(zhǔn)備與當(dāng)?shù)卣�府合作修建一所國際學(xué)校．為了建好、辦好學(xué)校，該企業(yè)總裁Mr．White 廣泛征求學(xué)生的意見，并公開了他的郵箱．請以"周杉"的名義給他寫一封E-mail，談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh及理由．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1．學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境（如：教室、操場…）
2．特色課程（如：網(wǎng)球、鋼琴…）
3．…
要求
1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右，郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think the new school should be nice and pleasant我認(rèn)為新的學(xué)校應(yīng)該是好看的愉快的．
think后是省略了that的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
It would be better for students to have some chances to practice in your company so that they can get some useful experience給學(xué)生一些在你公司實(shí)踐的機(jī)會將會更好，那樣他們能獲得一些有用的經(jīng)驗(yàn)．
so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句．

解答 Dear Mr．White，
I'm glad to hear you'll build an international school，and I'd like to give you some advice．I think the new school should be nice and pleasant．【高分句型一】Students need bright classrooms to study in，modern libraries to open up their eyes，large playgrounds to play different kinds of sports on．（學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境）The school may provide students with some special courses，such as art，tennis or piano lessons．These courses can make students relaxed and encourage them to develop freely．
（特色課程）It would be better for students to have some chances to practice in your company so that they can get some useful experience．【高分句型二】（實(shí)習(xí)機(jī)會）
I hope I can enter the school．
Sincerely yours，
Zhou Shan

點(diǎn)評 要求中只給出了要點(diǎn)，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多，注意將提示的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)．注意主謂一致問題．寫作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式，如賓語從句，條件狀語從句等．