Question

6．學校正在開展"創(chuàng)建和諧、安全校園"活動，作為即將離幵母校的學生，請你根據 提示為學校寫一份倡議書，號召大家為創(chuàng)建和諧、安全校園做貢獻，努力爭做文明學生．
提示詞：work hard，take part in，he friendly to，help，fight，run in the hallways
要求：1．短文需包含所有提示詞，語句通順、語法正確，并適當發(fā)揮．
2．文中不得出現真實姓名和校名．
3．短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數．
To build harmonious and safe campus
Our school is like our home．We should try to build up a harmonious and safe campus．First of all，
                                                               
Yours，
Gao Ming．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Thirdly，it is our duty to keep the school clean and tidy第三，保護學校干凈整潔是我們的職責．
it's one's duty to do sth 做某事是某人的職責．
【高分句型二】
Please do our best to make our school beautiful．請盡力讓我們的學校美麗．
do one's best to do sth 盡力做某事．

解答 Our school is like our home．We should try to build up a harmonious and safe campus．
First of all，the students in our school should work hard at our lessons．After school，we'd better take an active part in all kinds of activities to help improve our health and study．（學習和健康）
Then we should be friendly to one another．We should respect our teachers and get on well with our classmates．（文明禮貌）
Thirdly，it is our duty to keep the school  clean and tidy．【高分句型一】We shouldn't throw wastes around or pick flowers．（愛護環(huán)境）
Please do our best to make our school beautiful．【高分句型二】

點評 這是一篇命題作文，就創(chuàng)建和諧校園，寫一封倡議書．寫作中注意不能遺漏提示中的要點，適當發(fā)揮．在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性．結合材料可知本文主要是一般現在時，第一人稱．寫作中適當使用連詞，序數詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系．