Question

你想在QQ上結(jié)交一些筆友。請根據(jù)表格提供的內(nèi)容介紹你自己的過去、現(xiàn)在和未來。注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用。60--80詞左右。（10分）

Name:    David	Date of birth:  11/23/1996	Place of birth:   Jiangsu
Past	Now	Future
In 2000: start learning English In 2002: take part in Hope English Competition; win the first prize; like English more	study in a middle school; like doing sports; play… twice a week	go to university; want to be a reporter; travel all over the world

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Answer 1

My name is David. I was born in Jiangsu, on November 23rd, 1996. Let me tell you something about myself. When I was 4, I started to learn English. I practiced speaking and reading very often. In 2002, I took part in the Hope English Competition. Luckily, I won the first prize in the group of pupils. Now I am a middle school student. I like doing sports and I play table tennis twice a week. Exercise makes me happy and strong. I want to go to university after leaving high school. I am going to be a reporter. And I like traveling. I am going to travel all over the world in the future.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇介紹自己的短文，注意從過去,現(xiàn)在和未來三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行介紹。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)較為復(fù)雜,注意謂語動(dòng)詞與時(shí)間狀語的一致。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點(diǎn)評：做英語書面表達(dá)時(shí)，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫好后多讀多修改，我想一定會(huì)寫出滿意的文章來。