Question

19．今天是三月五日，星期六，學雷鋒日．你和同學們在陳老師帶領下分頭去了公園、養(yǎng)老院、醫(yī)院做好事．請根據所給內容寫一篇日記．
內容要點：1．天氣晴朗．
2.7：30在學校門口集中．
3．陳老師把我們分成三組．
4．第一組幫助清潔城市公園；第二組去養(yǎng)老院看望老人；我在第三組，去醫(yī)院看望生病的小孩．
5．雖然很累，但覺得很愉快．
提示詞：

要求：1．注意日記的格式和時態(tài)．
2．包括所有內容要點，用上所給的提示詞，可以適當發(fā)揮．
3．語句通順、語法正確，80詞左右．
4．文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實的姓名、地點和所在的學校的名稱．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They made it cleaner and tidier他們讓其更干凈．
make+sth+adj 讓…怎樣
【高分句型二】
I was very tired，but I felt very happy because I could help others我很累，但是我感覺很開心因為我能幫助他人．
because引導的原因狀語從句．

解答 Saturday，March 5th     Sunny 
     It was fine today．My classmates and I met at the school gate at 7：30．（時間地點）Mr．Chen divided us into three groups．Group One helped clean up the city park．They made it cleaner and tidier．【高分句型一】Group Two went to the old People's home to visit the old people．They played chess with them and performed a play for them．The
old people were very happy．I was in Group Three，I went to visit the sick children in the hospital with my classmates．We sang songs for them and told them some stories to cheer them up．（分組）   
I came home at 5：30，I was very tired，but I felt very happy because I could help others．【高分句型二】（感受）

點評 語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣．適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系．