Question

根據(jù)下列提示寫(xiě)一篇日記, 記錄下你一天的活動(dòng)和感受。

上周四和周五年級(jí)組織了本期的第一次考試。你考得不好，心情郁悶。

星期五晚上幾個(gè)同學(xué)邀你去KTV唱歌，那天晚上你們玩得十分開(kāi)心，增強(qiáng)了自信，你知道了：失敗是成功之母，并有了今后的打算。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)：100左右

2. 日記必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，但不要逐句翻譯，可以增加細(xì)節(jié)，使短文完整。

3. 日記的開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好。

參考詞匯： microphone 麥克風(fēng)

Friday Nov. 26, 2010                                   Sunny

On Thursday and Friday last week our grade organized a test. That evening I went to the KTV with a few classmates.

                                                                            

                                                                            

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Friday Nov. 26, 2010                                  Sunny

On Thursday and Friday last week our grade organized a test. That evening I went to the KTV with a few classmates.

It was the first test this term in our grade. I was in a bad mood after the test because I didn’t do well in the test, especially in English. At the KTV, everybody was in high spirits. Each sang his favorite songs. At the beginning, I was only one of the audience, listening to their songs. After a while, I joined them, picked up the microphone and sang my favorite songs. Some were singing while others were dancing. We had a wonderful time. Soon I forgot my worry.

I have become cheerful now. Above all I’ve gained self-confidence. Failure is the mother of success. I shouldn’t lose heart just because of one or two failures. I still have many chances to try.

【解析】本文是一篇日記，考生在審題時(shí)一定要注意時(shí)態(tài)，應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。日記的要點(diǎn)基本上都已經(jīng)給出了，考生只需要按照時(shí)間的順序翻譯成英語(yǔ)即可。在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中需要注意使用合適的時(shí)間順序的連接詞，讓文章成為一個(gè)有序的整體，也要注意使用高級(jí)的詞匯和高級(jí)的句型，讓文章更有特點(diǎn)。在最后一段可以適當(dāng)?shù)淖饕恍┌l(fā)揮。