Question

假設(shè)你是李華，你的英語(yǔ)老師Mr. Black要求你們周六下午去聽(tīng)一場(chǎng)關(guān)于英國(guó)歷史的講座，但你因故不能參加。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一封郵件向Mr. Black請(qǐng)假。

內(nèi)容主要包括：

1．表示歉意；

2．去機(jī)場(chǎng)接一位家鄉(xiāng)的老朋友；

3．對(duì)英國(guó)歷史很感興趣，為不能去聽(tīng)而感到遺憾；

4．詢問(wèn)是否有錄音，以便補(bǔ)聽(tīng)講座。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．郵件開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr. Black.

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Possible version:

Dear Mr. Black,

I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on British history this Saturday afternoon. An old friend from my hometown will come to see me and I have promised to meet her at the airport.

You know I am deeply interested in British society and history. It’s a pity to miss the lecture. I wonder if it is possible for the lecture to be recorded. If so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean so much to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk. I would appreciate it if you could allow me to ask for a leave of absence.

Thank you !

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，首先要認(rèn)真閱讀題目。假設(shè)你是李華，你的英語(yǔ)老師Mr. Black要求你們周六下午去聽(tīng)一場(chǎng)關(guān)于英國(guó)歷史的講座，但你因故不能參加。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一封郵件向Mr. Black請(qǐng)假。

內(nèi)容主要包括：1．表示歉意；2．去機(jī)場(chǎng)接一位家鄉(xiāng)的老朋友；3．對(duì)英國(guó)歷史很感興趣，為不能去聽(tīng)而感到遺憾；4．詢問(wèn)是否有錄音，以便補(bǔ)聽(tīng)講座。應(yīng)該用第一人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)，且需要用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。注意字?jǐn)?shù)，詞數(shù)100左右，不能太多，也不能太少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。