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書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分25分）

假定你是李華，在一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上，你看到一個(gè)名叫Grown-up的中學(xué)生發(fā)帖(post)尋求幫助，請(qǐng)根據(jù)帖子的內(nèi)容、寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和要求回帖。

Grown-up        Post at 20-05-2013  18:30                             1#

Hi, everyone,   I’m a Senior Grade Three student, and I am suffering from newable   mental pressure these days, what should I do?                                                                            TOP

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寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：

1. 告訴Grown-up心理壓力不可避免；     2. 告訴Grown-up心里壓力的危害； 

3. 建議Grown-up應(yīng)正確面對(duì)心理壓力；    4. 介紹你面對(duì)心里壓力時(shí)所采取的措施。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右。

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Possible version:

Hi, Grown-up,                                                                                                                                   

It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life. In my opinion, everyone will meet some mental pressure in their life. But if it lasts a long time, it may do harm to our body.

Whenever I meet pressure, I try to keep calm and think how to overcome it. Sometimes it is very effective. When I’m stressed out, I listen to music or do some sports. After that, I often find that my moods become much better. If I can’t overcome it, I will turn to my parents, teachers or good friends.

To sum up, we should face pressure bravely and overcome it actively. 

Hope my ideas will work.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，首先要認(rèn)真閱讀題目。假定你是李華，在一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上，你看到一個(gè)名叫Grown-up的中學(xué)生發(fā)帖(post)尋求幫助，請(qǐng)根據(jù)帖子的內(nèi)容、寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和要求回帖。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：

1. 告訴Grown-up心理壓力不可避免；2. 告訴Grown-up心里壓力的危害；3. 建議Grown-up應(yīng)正確面對(duì)心理壓力；4. 介紹你面對(duì)心里壓力時(shí)所采取的措施，應(yīng)該用第一人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。注意字?jǐn)?shù)，詞數(shù)100左右，不能太多，也不能太少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。