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假如你們學(xué)校“英語(yǔ)愛(ài)好者俱樂(lè)部”將對(duì)“良好飲食習(xí)慣”這一話題進(jìn)行討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)包括：

部分同學(xué)的飲食習(xí)慣	良好的飲食習(xí)慣	個(gè)人看法
不吃早餐 愛(ài)吃零食 偏食 飲食過(guò)量	飲食多樣化 飲食定時(shí)定量	重要性：有助于 身體健康……

注意：1．發(fā)言稿必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2．發(fā)言稿開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3．詞數(shù)：100左右。

4．參考詞匯：偏食be particular about food 零食snack

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.

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That’s all. Thank you!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat.  Therefore, it's very important for us to form healthy eating habits.

However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much.. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.

To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we'd better have meals regularly.

In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：本文是關(guān)于良好的飲食習(xí)慣的短文，用文章的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，考生只需要翻譯即可。要注意使用合適的連接詞，如however, firstly, secondly, thirdly； besides等讓各個(gè)要點(diǎn)連接成完整的整體，成為一篇文章。選詞方面要使用合適的高級(jí)詞匯來(lái)提升文章的層次。個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)時(shí)可以使用：One apple keeps doctors away等諺語(yǔ)。

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點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類作文的關(guān)鍵是要點(diǎn)不能省略，要完全包括在內(nèi)。要注意使用合適的連接詞和高級(jí)的詞匯和短語(yǔ)，也可以使用不同的句式。本文考生完全可以使用適當(dāng)?shù)闹V語(yǔ)來(lái)提升文章的層次。