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17．假設(shè)你是李華，你的一個(gè)英語(yǔ)筆友，加拿大的中學(xué)生Peter來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)你正在閱讀什么英語(yǔ)報(bào)刊，恰好這學(xué)期你訂閱了《英語(yǔ)周報(bào)》（English Weekly）．請(qǐng)就一下信息用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封回信，向他介紹相關(guān)情況．
1．《英語(yǔ)周報(bào)》歷史悠久，于1983年4月在中國(guó)山西省創(chuàng)刊；
2．該報(bào)與教材聯(lián)系緊密，使用方便，很受廣大師生歡迎；
3．內(nèi)容豐富：開(kāi)辟有電影評(píng)論、名人軼事、運(yùn)動(dòng)娛樂(lè)等專(zhuān)欄．
4．因?yàn)樗�，你�?duì)英語(yǔ)更感興趣了，也取得了很大進(jìn)步．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：專(zhuān)欄：column 教材：textbook
Dear Peter，
I'm very glad to hear from you．It's my pleasure to tell you something about English Weekly，which I am using this term．（高分句型一）
English Weekly is an English learning newspaper with a long history，first published in April，1983 in Shanxi province，China．It is closely connected with the textbooks．Therefore，it is convenient for use．That is also why it is so popular with the teachers and students．Furthermore，it has rich contents，containing many interesting columns such as film reviews，celebrities，sports and amusements．（高分句型二）
In fact，I really benefit a lot from this newspaper．Because of it，I have become more and more interested in English and have made much progress in it．（高分句型三）
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你是李華，你的一個(gè)英語(yǔ)筆友，加拿大的中學(xué)生Peter來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)你正在閱讀什么英語(yǔ)報(bào)刊，恰好這學(xué)期你訂閱了《英語(yǔ)周報(bào)》（English Weekly）．請(qǐng)就一下信息用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封回信，向他介紹相關(guān)情況，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：．《英語(yǔ)周報(bào)》歷史悠久，于1983年4月在中國(guó)山西省創(chuàng)刊；該報(bào)與教材聯(lián)系緊密，使用方便，很受廣大師生歡迎；內(nèi)容豐富：開(kāi)辟有電影評(píng)論、名人軼事、運(yùn)動(dòng)娛樂(lè)等專(zhuān)欄．因?yàn)樗�，你�?duì)英語(yǔ)更感興趣了，也取得了很大進(jìn)步．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：hear from收到…的信息；be connected with與…有聯(lián)系；Therefore因此；Furthermore而且；In fact事實(shí)上；Because of由于；make progress 取得進(jìn)步
It's my pleasure to tell you something about English Weekly，which I am using this term．（高分句型一）
Furthermore，it has rich contents，containing many interesting columns such as film reviews，celebrities，sports and amusements．（高分句型二）
Because of it，I have become more and more interested in English and have made much progress in it．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear peter，
       I am very glad to hear from you．It's my pleasure to tell you something about English Weekly，which I am using this term．（高分句型一）
       English Weekly is an English learning newspaper with a long history，first published in April，1983 in Shanxi province，China．It is closely connected with the textbooks．Therefore，it is convenient for use．That is also why it is so popular with the teachers and students．Furthermore，it has rich contents，containing many interesting columns such as film reviews，celebrities，sports and amusements．（高分句型二）
       In fact，I really benefit a lot from this newspaper．Because of it，I have become more and more interested in English and have made much progress in it．（高分句型三）
       Best wishes!
                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．