Question

寫(xiě)作：（滿分25分）

國(guó)內(nèi)某家英文報(bào)紙?jiān)O(shè)有一個(gè)求助信箱（letters to Dr Helper）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)一份學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀中列出的部分信息，以高三學(xué)生王勇的名義，用英語(yǔ)給Dr Helper寫(xiě)一封短信。

學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀：

1．每日在校時(shí)間9小時(shí)；

2．每日作業(yè)時(shí)間3-4小時(shí)；

3．每日課外活動(dòng)時(shí)間幾乎沒(méi)有；

4．每日睡眠時(shí)間不足；

負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重原因：

考試壓力大，作業(yè)多，家長(zhǎng)期望高。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)：100左右； 2．信的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入要求的詞數(shù)。

生詞：負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重overload 壓力 pressure 期望 expectations 

Dear Dr Helper,

I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure.

                                                                                     

 

                                                                                    

 

                                                                                    

Yours sincerely,

Wang Yong

 

Answer 1

【答案】

參考范文：

Dear Dr Helper,

I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Every day I have to stay at school for nine hours to have lessons and spend at least three to four hours doing my homework at home . We teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves,but we hardly have any time to do what we want. Besides ,we even don’t have enough sleep .

There seems to be three causes about the overload ;the pressure of examinations ,too much homework and the high expectations from the parents . We are often warned that if we don’t do our best, we won’t have the chance to go to university.

I write this letter only to wish that I could have someone to talk to. I am looking forward to your advice.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Yong

【解析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作（求助信），寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容與學(xué)生日常生活和學(xué)習(xí)有關(guān)。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)為：現(xiàn)狀和三大負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重原因（現(xiàn)象），如何減負(fù)？