Question

假設(shè)你是卜曼宜，你購(gòu)買(mǎi)了一部某外國(guó)公司生產(chǎn)的手機(jī)，因有質(zhì)量問(wèn)題，要求該公司更換。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英文寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。

　　要點(diǎn)：1. 問(wèn)題：手機(jī)不響鈴，不能發(fā)短信；該產(chǎn)品已售完，無(wú)法更換；型號(hào)新，無(wú)配件，無(wú)法維修。 2. 要求：公司應(yīng)盡快予以更換。

　　注意：1. 詞數(shù)為100左右；

　　2. 參考詞匯：配件-- spare part;

　　3. 電子郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入你所寫(xiě)詞數(shù)）；

　　4.已給出的電子郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾不得抄入答題卡。

Answer 1

　Dear Sir，

　　I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.

　　Thank you for your consideration.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Bu Manyi

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