Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分30分）

請(qǐng)以“one thing I’m proud of”為題， 用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100—120個(gè)詞的短文， 記述一見(jiàn)你自己認(rèn)為要求如下：

1.記述事情經(jīng)過(guò)

2.簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明你感到得意的原因或從中得到的啟示

注意：文章的標(biāo)題已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）.

One Thing I’m Proud of

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Onepossible version：

One Thing I'm Proud of

　　I still remember how I became agood table tennis player.

　　The first day I went to high school,I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skilful they were,I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully tolearn their techniques. Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best playersin my class.

　　I am really proud of this experience,because it helps me realize that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect.”

【解析】

試題解析從文章體裁分析，本文是一篇典型的開(kāi)放式記敘文的寫(xiě)作，主要讓學(xué)生就one thing  I’m proud of展開(kāi)敘述，同時(shí)寫(xiě)出自豪的原因和啟示。應(yīng)從三方面來(lái)寫(xiě)：一 ：敘述自豪的事情。二：重點(diǎn)敘述事情的經(jīng)過(guò)。三：說(shuō)明自豪的理由在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中注意好詞好句的應(yīng)用

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

文章使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子給文章增色，如：I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis。（see sb doing看見(jiàn)某人正在做某事）, Amazed at how skilful they were,I was determined to be just as good.形容詞短語(yǔ)Amazed at做原因狀語(yǔ)，（be determined to do） 下定決心做某事. 　I am really proud of this experience (be proud of 以。。。。。為自豪)，并且主語(yǔ)了句子的銜接如：then，also 等。

考點(diǎn)：開(kāi)放式作文。