Question

短文改錯

　　My hometown is a pretty city, so people there are

(1) _________

kind and polite. With coming of spring, grass and

(2) _________

trees turn green, and flowers grew in many colors.

(3) _________

In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more

(4) _________

beautiful. After autumn arrives, the city looks as an

(5) _________

old man with leaves fallen from the trees. In winter,

(6) _________

a lot of white birds come to my city for food. I can

(7) _________

wait more patiently above the sea for quite a long

(8) _________

time. While they find fish come to the surface,

(9) _________

they fly down immediate and catch them without

(10) __________

delay. That is my city, and I love it so much.

Answer 1

答案：略
解析：

(1)so改為and My hometown is a pretty city與people there are kind and polite是并列關系，不是因果關系。 (2)coming前加the 春天的到來，應為特指。 (3)grew改為grow 整篇文章用了現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，因此grow也應用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 (4)skies改為sky sky為獨一無二的東西。 (5)as改為like look like為固定短語，“看起來像”。 (6)fallen改為falling 此處為with復合結構，leave與fall之間是主謂關系，因此fall應用現(xiàn)在分詞。 (7)I改為They 主語要一致，上文指的white birds，因此此處應用they代替white birds。 (8)去掉more 本句句意無比較的含義，因此應去掉more。 (9)While改為When while表示段時間，而此處的find為瞬間動詞，因此此處應用when，when既可表段時間，也可表點時間。 (10)immediate改為immediately fly為動詞，應用副詞修飾。