Question

假如你是你校的校園電視臺(tái)的小記者。下面是你最近對(duì)你校100名高一學(xué)生早餐情況的一份調(diào)查表。請(qǐng)根據(jù)這份調(diào)查表所提供的情況寫(xiě)一篇100字左右的短文，并呼吁同學(xué)們認(rèn)真對(duì)待早餐，說(shuō)明不吃早餐會(huì)對(duì)身體帶來(lái)不利的影響。
文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，請(qǐng)接著寫(xiě)。
參考詞匯： treat…seriously認(rèn)真對(duì)待…； nutrition  n.營(yíng)養(yǎng)；
nutritious adj. 營(yíng)養(yǎng)的；     appetite 食欲，胃口

不吃早餐	隨便吃一點(diǎn)	吃得夠量并且講究營(yíng)養(yǎng)
35%	45%	20%
原因：1. 起床較遲，來(lái)不及吃早餐；2. 沒(méi)有胃口，不想吃； 3. 父母忙，不能給孩子準(zhǔn)備早餐。

 
Recently I’ve made an investigation among 100 students of
senior one in our school _________________________________
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Answer 1

Recently I’ve made an investigation among 100 students of senior one in our school. About 35 percent students go to school without breakfast while 45 percent students do not treat breakfast seriously. Only 20 percent students have enough breakfast with enough nutrition every morning.
The reason lies in the following facts. Some students don’t get up early and can’t spare any time for breakfast. Some don’t have a good appetite and don’t feel like eating anything. Besides, some parents are so busy that they don’t have enough time to prepare breakfast for their children.
I hold the belief that it won’t do good for us students to go without breakfast. It’s not good for our health. Therefore, we should have enough nutritious food for our breakfast.                               

解析試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文，要點(diǎn)和開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出.我們所要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)略,故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多。需要注意不要偏離文章中心.寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題.盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。要看清題目要求，短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，但不要逐字翻譯；可以適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫
考點(diǎn)：話題類作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于話題類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。同時(shí)要注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)，120 ～150，切不可少于120字，同時(shí)也不要寫(xiě)得過(guò)于冗長(zhǎng)，適度即可。