Question

假定你是李華，準(zhǔn)備參加學(xué)校舉辦的主題為“How to protect ourselves in the school?”的英語(yǔ)征文比賽。請(qǐng)按要求寫(xiě)一篇短文。主要內(nèi)容包括：在學(xué)校發(fā)生地震或火災(zāi)時(shí)，我們?cè)撊绾伪Ｗo(hù)自己？

1.       只選其中一種突發(fā)災(zāi)害闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)；

2.       要求至少寫(xiě)出三點(diǎn)措施；

3.       可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以行文連貫。

注意：詞數(shù)120左右；開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

How to protect ourselves in the school?

Life is not easy. As a student, we should learn how to protect ourselves in the school.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Life is not easy. As a student, we should learn how to protect ourselves in the school.

When an earthquake happens, first we should calm down, which is the most important. Shouting and crying is of no use. Follow the teachers’ guidance and keep our actions in order.

Second, hide beneath our desks with our schoolbags on our heads if we are in class. That can keep us a little safer. Be sure not to jump off the building. Third, if we are on the playground, do not move. Sit on our feet and use hands to cover our heads so that they can be kept from being hit on. At last, help each other. When we are faced with natural disasters, individual power is tiny. Only by uniting can we overcome the difficulties.

These are my suggestions. Keep them in mind and maybe some day we can survive in case of an earthquake.

【解析】

試題分析：考查半開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作。本文寫(xiě)作的話(huà)題是“How to protect ourselves in the school?”考生可以從地震，或者火災(zāi)選取一個(gè)來(lái)描寫(xiě)。在寫(xiě)措施的時(shí)候，可以從遇見(jiàn)災(zāi)難時(shí)要保持冷靜，賓語(yǔ)慌亂；躲在課桌下面或者在墻體旁邊減少受傷的幾率。千萬(wàn)不能隨便跳樓逃生。如果可能要相互救助，相互鼓勵(lì)等等。根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。

考點(diǎn)：考查半開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話(huà)題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。