Question

改錯(cuò)（1’*10=10分）
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加: 在此處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出修改的詞。
刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意: 1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。
Grandma Moses was crazy about painting soon before she picked it up and worked hard at it．She painted careful and her works were nice．She first painted only to please oneself, and then began to sell her works with a little money．In 1993, a collector, Louis Caldor happen to see several of Grandma Moses’ work hanging in a shop．He liked them, buying them at once, and set out to look for less．Caldor held a show to introduce the works of Grandma Moses other artists．Grandma Moses, who was world-famous, was died on December 13, 1961, at the age of 101．

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Grandma Moses was crazy about painting soon before she picked it up and worked hard at it.
after
She painted careful and her works were nice. She first painted only to please oneself, and then
carefully                                             herself
began to sell her works with a little money. In 1993, a collector, Louis Caldor happen to see
for                                         happened
several of Grandma Moses’ work hanging in a shop. He liked them, buying them at once, and set
works                            bought
out to look for less. Caldor held a show to introduce the works of Grandma Moses∧other artists.
more                                                 to
Grandma Moses, who was world-famous, was died on December 13, 1961, at the age of 101.

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