Question

下面是某中外合資企業(yè)刊登在昨天的China Daily上的一則廣告：
Office secretary(辦公秘書)， with experience in bookkeeping, typewriting, public relations, operating PC (personal computer).  Address,  age,  health condition.
Write to A518, Charlie Office.
假如你是張林，現(xiàn)年20歲，身體健康，學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)6年，學(xué)過(guò)廣告中所列項(xiàng)目。通信地址是濱海市745信箱（P.O.Box745）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)廣告中提出的招聘職務(wù)、應(yīng)聘條件和你自己的簡(jiǎn)要情況，寫一封自薦信。字?jǐn)?shù)：120詞左右。
Dear Sir,
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Yours;
Zhang Ling

Answer 1

Dear Sir,
I have read your advertisement in yesterday’s China Daily. I feel I am qualified for the job in your company. I’m 20 years old and in good health. After graduation from a middle school, I studied English for six years. I also learned bookkeeping, typewriting and public relations. I’m good at operating PC and have a good command of English. I’m interested in the position of a secretary. I want very much to be accepted by your company. I’ll work hard if I can be a member in your company.
Yours,
Zhang Ling

解析試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。要求根據(jù)廣告中提出的招聘職務(wù)、應(yīng)聘條件和你自己的簡(jiǎn)要情況，寫一封自薦信，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。
考點(diǎn)：考查書信類短文寫作。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。