Question

國(guó)外某網(wǎng)站舉辦新一輪網(wǎng)上討論活動(dòng)，正面向全球中學(xué)生征集話題。假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，經(jīng)常訪問(wèn)該網(wǎng)站�，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你用英文給該網(wǎng)站發(fā)送一封電子郵件，向其推薦話題。

內(nèi)容包括：

自我簡(jiǎn)介             寫(xiě)信目錄

話題：我們應(yīng)該感恩（thankful）       推薦的理由            預(yù)祝活動(dòng)成功

注意： 222

1.詞數(shù)100左右                                                            22 2                  2.郵件格式已為你給出

3.郵件中不能出現(xiàn)本人真實(shí)信息           4.請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答

Answer 1

Dearsirs,

I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School. I often visit your website. I am very glad to know that you will make a new round of courses and are collecting topics facing the middle school students. As a student, I really want to recommend a topic to you wholeheartedly. It is that we should be thankful.  Living in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful to. We should be thankful to our parents because it was they that brought us into this world; we should be thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a hand. So I can say we live in a grateful world. I hope that the activity will be a great success.

Yours

Li Hua

解析:

這是一篇命題巧妙地書(shū)寫(xiě)體半開(kāi)發(fā)性提綱式作文。話題樹(shù)有教育意義，符合中學(xué)實(shí)際引導(dǎo)學(xué)生思考問(wèn)題。在寫(xiě)作中應(yīng)注意如下幾點(diǎn)：

1. 緊緊圍繞話題“我們應(yīng)該感恩”。

2. 但自我簡(jiǎn)介、 寫(xiě)信目錄 、推薦的理由 、預(yù)�；顒�(dòng)成功都是圍繞話題展開(kāi)。

3. 注意分清段落層次，上下文的過(guò)渡。