Question

短文寫作。(30分)　根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。
Encouragement from a friend plays a very important role in motivating(激勵(lì)) you to solve the problems you are facing. It helps you fight the difficulties and get out of an unfavorable（不利的） situation you are stuck in.
（1）無須寫標(biāo)題，文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不得照抄英語提示語。（2）除詩歌外，文體不限。
（3）文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；（4）詞數(shù)為120左右。
Encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times.                          
                                                                                   

Answer 1

A possible version:
As an old saying goes, “Encouragement is to us what sunshine is to trees. It is universally acknowledged that encouragement plays an essential part in our daily life.
As is vividly depicted in the sentence, there was a time when I was not interested in my work. My grades had gone from bad to worse. Fortunately, my teacher thought highly of me, saying I was the most intelligent student in my class, now I attributed my great progress to her encouragement. On the assumption that I hadn’t received her encouragement, I couldn’t have made such great progress.
As far as I am aware, under no circumstances can we ignore the significance of encouragement. It is conceivable that encouragement enables us to live normally. Personally, I think it is encouragement that helps us get out of an unfavorable situation you are stuck in.
So important is encouragement that we can’t emphasize the significance of encouragement too much. Furthermore, there is no denying that encouragement helps us grow up in a healthy way both mentally and physically.

解析試題分析：本文屬于開放性作文，要求學(xué)生發(fā)表關(guān)于鼓勵(lì)的短文。可以從激勵(lì)對(duì)學(xué)生的心理，行動(dòng)以及從自己的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷來說明鼓勵(lì)對(duì)學(xué)生的積極作用。在寫作的時(shí)候要從文章整體的謀篇布局以及選詞和造句方面多下功夫。
考點(diǎn)：考查開放性作文的寫作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文考查了開放性作文的寫作，話題是考生很熟悉的激勵(lì)的作用。在寫作時(shí)候注意選擇高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型來提高文章的層次和文采，同時(shí)要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點(diǎn)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。在文章中最好使用諺語，來作為最大的亮點(diǎn)。