Question

假設(shè)你是高一新生康康，最近你們班正在就“成長的煩惱(Growing Pains)”展開討論。請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一封信給你的外國朋友Tony，側(cè)重告知對策內(nèi)容。

煩惱	對策
1.  與朋友相處時，有些小矛盾 2.  室友有些吵鬧，很難入睡 3.  考試犯錯	1.  人無完人，體諒別人 2.  與室友談心溝通，明白事理 3.  放松冷靜，相信自己；請教老師，尋求幫助

1.       注意：不要逐句翻譯所給信息；為使行文連貫，可適當增減細節(jié)；

2.       詞數(shù)：100左右；開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tony,

    Recently our class have talked about “Growing Pains” of students, and the main ways to deal with the problems are as follows.

Yours,

                                                       Kang Kang

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tony,

    Recently our class have talked about “Growing Pains” of students, and the main ways to deal with the problems are as follows.

Nobody is perfect. Instead of focusing on your friends’ weak points, try finding their good ones. Then you will enjoy deeper relationships.

Noisy roommates are always a problem but there are several things you can do. First of all, try talking to them. If it fails and you really suffer a lot from the noise, let your teacher know about it.

As to making mistakes in the exams, the first thing you need to do is (to) relax and have a cool head. Be confident and try your best to do well next time. Turn to your teacher if you haven’t done well.

What do you think of the ways? Looking forward to your opinions soon!

Yours,                                                        Kang kang

【解析】

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