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假設(shè)你是Tom，曾在中國學(xué)習(xí)半年，現(xiàn)已回國。你想聯(lián)系你的中國老師Mr．Yang，但沒有其聯(lián)系方式。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給你的中國同學(xué)李華寫一封信：

1．感謝李華對(duì)你漢語學(xué)習(xí)的幫助；

2．詢問Mr．Yang的近況并索要其聯(lián)系方式；

3．邀請(qǐng)李華在圣誕節(jié)期間來美國感受美國文化。

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答案： Dear Li hua, 　　How is everything going recently?After I came back from America half a year ago, I often remember the days I was there, and I missed you and Ms．Smith very much．I am writing to ask about something about Ms．Smith．Could you tell me her email address or telephone number that I could contact her?I have something important to tell her． 　　As you know, the Spring Festival in China is coming soon, I really hope you could come to China to visit my house, and celebrate the traditional festival with my family together．Then I can be your guide to many places, and show you the culture which is different from yours． 　　Hope for you early reply, and best wishes! Yours, Tom 　　詳解：首先考生應(yīng)該把寫信的目的陳述清楚；其次要照顧所給重點(diǎn)，也就是得分點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，切忌逐字逐句翻譯，為了是句子之間緊湊，應(yīng)該適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連接詞。另外，作為優(yōu)秀作文的前提是適當(dāng)使用高級(jí)詞匯及句型結(jié)構(gòu)，主要是為了展示自己的寫作功底。