Question

書面表達（共25分）（原創(chuàng)）
你朋友Joe寫信告訴你他找工作又失敗了，他向你詢問一些方法，請按照以下寫作內(nèi)容和要求，以英語書信形式給予答復(fù)（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出）。
1、正確面對目前形勢（全球金融危機、沖擊、競爭對手多而且強）；
2、傳播你在找工作的信息；
3、精心準(zhǔn)備好自己的工作簡歷；
4、確信自己具備你求職工作所要求的能力；
5、準(zhǔn)備好每一次面試，留下好印象，展現(xiàn)自己的能力。
注意：信的開頭和結(jié)尾已有，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：1、全球金融危機the global financial crisis
2、個人簡歷resume
Dear Joe,
I’m very sorry to hear you failed again in finding a job.                          
                                                                          
                                                                          
Good luck!
Yours truly
Hanghang

Answer 1

Dear Joe,
I’m very sorry to hear that you failed again in finding a job. Taking a right attitude towards the present situation is a must at first. It’s true that it’s tough seeking for a job—especially if you’re competing with thousands of other hopeful students with the global financial crisis hitting the economy. Here are a few tips which might be of a little use.
Getting connected to your network and keeping everyone informed that you’re looking for a job are surely urgent matters. Meanwhile, it’s worth your time and money to present yourself well by preparing your perfect resume carefully. When you apply for a job, be sure you match any skills required. What’s more, don’t forget to make good preparations for every interview, where and leaving a good impression can make all the differentce in getting the job.
Good luck!
Yours truly
Hanghang

解析試題分析：本文的寫作首先表明讓他對現(xiàn)在的就業(yè)形式有一個正確的態(tài)度a right attitude towards the present situation is a must at first.然后分析工作難找的原因，是因為經(jīng)融危機the global financial crisis hitting the economy.以及與很多優(yōu)秀的人才進行競爭competing with thousands of other hopeful students.然后提出自己的建議，傳播你在找工作的信息keeping everyone informed that you’re looking for a job、精心準(zhǔn)備好自己的工作簡歷present yourself well by preparing your perfect resume carefully.確信自己具備你求職工作所要求的能力be sure you match any skills required.準(zhǔn)備好每一次面試，make good preparations for every interview留下好印象，展現(xiàn)自己的能力expressing your abilities well。
考點：提綱類寫作
點評：提綱類寫作的文章較開放式的文體，比較好寫。學(xué)生在寫作的過程中，首先思路要清晰，要對所表達的句子通順的說出來，遇到不會的要學(xué)會替換所用語，來達到同樣的意思。在每一篇作文中，對于表達觀點的句子，都要用上起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞來加強文章的層次感，適當(dāng)運用俗語，如when it comes to當(dāng)談到，運用平時常用的句式來使文章富有變化，表達地道得體。