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分析下面的書面表達(dá)，指出其中的錯(cuò)誤．

　　下面是某中學(xué)對(duì)該校200名高中畢業(yè)生(男女各100名)的擇業(yè)理想作出調(diào)查后所繪制的圖表．請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中情況用英語(yǔ)寫一則報(bào)導(dǎo)．其中包括：1．?dāng)?shù)據(jù)信息；2．男女擇業(yè)的差異和共同點(diǎn)；3．對(duì)比最大的(striking contrast)職業(yè)．

　　Middle school students have more (1) ideas about their future jobs. The most striking contrast is in teaching: thirty percent of girls will (2) like to be teachers but (3) only five percent of boys want to be teachers. Twenty percent of boys want to be businessmen and another twenty percent want to become lawyers, but girls take up fifteen percent in these two fields.

　　That (4) boys like to do most is to become managers, comparing (5) to thirty percent of girls who want to be so. Now with the development of our society, more and more students want to be managers or bosses of some companies. Besides teaching, the second choice of girls is (6) managers. The number is not small. Girls are also expected (7) to show their ability in this field.

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解題思路：(1)去掉more．因?yàn)榍拔奈刺岬饺魏蝘dea． 　　(2)will改為would，更符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣．因?yàn)?would like to…是固定短語(yǔ)． 　　(3)but改為 while，表示對(duì)比． 　　(4)that改為 what．因?yàn)樗�在主語(yǔ)從句中作賓語(yǔ)． 　　(5)comparing改為compared．這里應(yīng)該是過去分詞作狀語(yǔ)，表示被動(dòng)的動(dòng)作． 　　(6)is后面應(yīng)加上to be或to become．不然，句意不完整． 　　(7)are also expected應(yīng)改為also expect．這里表示女生們“希望”……