Question

短文改錯(cuò)

I've really got to do something to lose weight because

I'm getting much too fat. I wasn't worried about it until I go

                                                        1._________

to see the doctor. He told me that I'd probably had a heart

                                                      2._________

attack while I started eating less. When you're on a diet you

                                                      3._________

have to stop eat too much even though you are always hungry.

                                                      4._________

They may be very hard to do and you certainly need a lot

                                                      5._________

of will-power to succeed. So I will stay on a health farm for a

                                                      6._________

month I won't be able to eat much and so I'li have to stick

                                                      7._________

to my diet. I'll also do plenty of exercise, which won't give

                                                      8._________

me any harm too. Both the diet and the exercise will

                                                      9._________

help me to lose weight and feel more better.                               

10._________

Answer 1

1． So→went 

2． had→have

3． while→unless

4． eat→eating 

5． They→This／That／It 

6. √

7． month后加where／when 

8． give→do

9． too→either 

10．more→much或去掉more

解析:

1.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤，此句的意思為“我去看了醫(yī)生后才開(kāi)始為此擔(dān)憂(yōu)”�？瘁t(yī)生應(yīng)為過(guò)去的動(dòng)作。

2.動(dòng)詞的謂語(yǔ)形式出錯(cuò)，此處I'd應(yīng)為I would，would后該用動(dòng)詞原形。

3.從屬連詞錯(cuò)，根據(jù)邏輯意義該用unless，意為“如果不”“除非”。

4.根據(jù)意義，此處eat應(yīng)為stop的賓語(yǔ)，該用ing形式。

5.指代上文的那件事，所以用單數(shù)。

6． √

7. 結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤。少定語(yǔ)從句的關(guān)系詞。根據(jù)意義，先行詞可為farm，也可為month。

8. do sth．harm為固定詞組。

9. 此句為否定的定語(yǔ)從句，否定句中該用either。

10. 此句意思為“感覺(jué)好多了”，加強(qiáng)比較級(jí)語(yǔ)氣該用much。