Question

短文改錯(cuò)

This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very

crowded and I had to stand. Besides me there was a woman held a little boy

in her arms. In front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be

sleeping. I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with

the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man.

Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile, “Be quiet. This

uncle must very tired because of hard work.” The young man must have

heard the word. His face turned red and offered one seat for the woman at once.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 去掉a

 Besides改為Beside

 held改為holding

 occupies改為occupied

 curious改為curiously

 if改為that或者去掉if

 her改為my

 must后面加be

 word改為words

 for改為to

【解析】

試題分析：

 去掉a  固定搭配by bus坐公交車。

 Besides改為Beside 這里的beside是介詞“在…旁邊”；在我的旁邊是一個(gè)抱著孩子的婦女。

 held改為holding 本句指的動(dòng)詞hold與前面的名詞a woman構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故使用現(xiàn)在分詞短語在句中作定語修飾名詞a woman，指抱著孩子的那個(gè)婦女。

 occupies改為occupied 本文講述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，故使用一般過去時(shí)occupied。

 curious改為curiously  只有副詞curiously修飾動(dòng)詞asking his mother好奇地問她的媽媽。

 if改為that或者去掉if 動(dòng)詞think后面的賓語從句可以用that修飾，that在句中不充當(dāng)任何成分，可以省略。

 her改為my 根據(jù)句意：超出我的預(yù)料，是指我沒有預(yù)料到，而不是她。

 must后面加be 本句使用的是“must+動(dòng)詞原形”對(duì)現(xiàn)在的情況進(jìn)行的推測，must be tired一定很累了。

 word改為words 用復(fù)數(shù)形式words表示所說的話。

 for改為to 固定搭配offer sth to sb 向某人提供某物。

考點(diǎn)：考查學(xué)生在上下文語境中對(duì)詞匯語法的掌握情況

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題考查較為細(xì)致，要求考生要特別耐心答題中注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致，時(shí)態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應(yīng)用。一般的這類題型不會(huì)出現(xiàn)太復(fù)雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考察基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)較多。平時(shí)應(yīng)注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)。修改前先細(xì)讀短文，標(biāo)出出錯(cuò)的位置，改完以后還得細(xì)讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順，符合邏輯。