Question

開(kāi)學(xué)之初，學(xué)校講政治校園中一些不文明的行為，假如你是班長(zhǎng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿，呼吁同學(xué)們規(guī)范自己的行為，做文明學(xué)生。

列舉一些不文明行為以及影響，如：亂丟垃圾，隨地吐痰，亂涂，大聲喧嘩，打架等。

2. 怎樣改善這種狀況。（至少兩點(diǎn)）

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾以為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：文明的 civilized   亂涂 scribble  

Dear fellow classmates,

         It’s a great pleasure for me to make a speech here.                                       

                                                                                  

         That’s all. Thank you.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear fellow classmates,

It’s a great pleasure for me to make a speech here. With the new term coming, we’re happy to be back at school and hope to see our school take on a new look. To keep our school beautiful, we should avoid such behavior as spitting, littering, and scribbling in public places. Occasionally, some of us talk loudly, quarrel with others or even do dangerous things, all of which can harm the harmonious and quiet atmosphere of our school.

As we know, civilized behavior is of great importance. It not only shows our good qualities but also makes us live and study happily at school, so we should obey the school rules and behave well. Only by doing so can we live a more comfortable life on campus.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】

試題分析：考查演講稿的寫(xiě)作。以班長(zhǎng)的名義準(zhǔn)備一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿，呼吁同學(xué)們規(guī)范自己的行為，做文明學(xué)生。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點(diǎn)只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)，同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】With the new term coming, we’re happy to be back at school and hope to see our school take on a new look.這句話是with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)， To keep our school beautiful, we should avoid such behavior as spitting, littering, and scribbling in public places. 這句話是不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)，Occasionally, some of us talk loudly, quarrel with others or even do dangerous things, all of which can harm the harmonious and quiet atmosphere of our school.這是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，

As we know, civilized behavior is of great importance. 這句話也是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，It not only shows our good qualities but also makes us live and study happily at school, so we should obey the school rules and behave well.這句話用了not only…but also…，Only by doing so can we live a more comfortable life on campus.這句話用的是倒裝句。

考點(diǎn)：考查演講稿類書(shū)面表達(dá)