Question

書面表達(dá)

假如你是高中生李華，有感于校園中存在的隨地吐痰（to spit）和亂丟垃圾（to litter）等不文明行為，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給校長(zhǎng)寫一封信，信中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：

1．說(shuō)明寫信目的；

2．對(duì)這些行為進(jìn)行批評(píng)；

3．提出建議（至少兩點(diǎn)）；

注意：1．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐條翻譯。

2．詞數(shù)150左右。

3．信的抬頭、落款及信的第一句已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。

November 15, 2012

Mr. Headmaster,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior III.                                   

________________________________________________________________________ 

 

Your faithfully,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

November 15, 2012

Mr. Headmaster,

I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior III. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behaviour among us students: spitting and littering. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does hard to the image of our school.

I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to spit and litter about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇半開放性作文，要點(diǎn)需要考生自己組織，如隨地吐痰的危害可以從傳播疾病，有損形象等方面。政府要加強(qiáng)對(duì)這方面的教育的力度，人們也要走自律。我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。

考點(diǎn)：圖表類

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于半開放性短文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。