Question

假定你在參加一場(chǎng)英語(yǔ)辯論賽，你是正方辯手，試用英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)要地表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。

主題	Shall a senior school student take a part-time job in holidays?
觀點(diǎn)	1. 高中生重視功課，面對(duì)社會(huì)所知甚少。
	2．假期做a part-time job是很好的社會(huì)實(shí)踐。
	3. 假期是最好的補(bǔ)償時(shí)間。
	3．通過(guò)書(shū)本學(xué)到的東西不如通過(guò)經(jīng)驗(yàn)學(xué)到的東西有效。
	4．通過(guò)社會(huì)實(shí)踐，我們可以在知識(shí)和能力兩個(gè)方面取得進(jìn)步。
	5．假期做a part-time job的報(bào)酬對(duì)家里或多或少有些幫助。
結(jié)論	高中生……

注意：（社會(huì)實(shí)踐：social practice; 社會(huì)：society ; 知識(shí)：knowledge ）
1、詞數(shù)100左右；2、開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。
Dear friends,
Here are my points .
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Answer 1

Dear friends,
Here are my points. We students of today paid much attention to our lessons and knew little of society though it’s not our fault. A holiday is the best time to make up for that. Taking a part-time job is a good form of social practice. What is learned in books can’t have the same (deep) effect on us as what is learned through experience. In social practice, we can surely make progress in both knowledge and ability. Besides, taking a part-time job, we may get paid(be paid) more or less to help our families. Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a part-time job in holidays, if possible, of course.

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。