Question

短文寫作

某英語報社擬成立“微笑俱樂部”，現(xiàn)向全球征募會員。要求申請者提交一篇題為“I Want to Smile”的英語短文。請你以申請者的身份，根據(jù)以下思路圖的提示用英語寫一篇短文。

注意：1．根據(jù)思路圖適當(dāng)展開，以使行文連貫；

2．詞數(shù)：120左右。

I Want to Smile

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Answer 1

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解析：

評分原則： 　　1、主要結(jié)構(gòu)正確、用給定的英語詞完整表達所給的漢語信息，給滿分； 　　2、未用給定詞不給分； 　　3、主要結(jié)構(gòu)不正確不給分； 　　4、主要結(jié)構(gòu)正確，信息完整，但一個或一個以上拼寫錯誤扣0．5分； 　　5、主要結(jié)構(gòu)正確，信息有遺漏扣0．5分； 　　6、主要結(jié)構(gòu)正確，添加無關(guān)信息扣0．5分； 　　7、其它可以接受的可能答案。 　　書面表達： I Want to Smile 　　There are many advantages of smiling．It can not only make us happy, but also please others．If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return．So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible． 　　First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and taken all the trouble to bring me up．They arrange almost everything for me．With their help, I have made great progress．I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile．Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life． 　　In a word, let's greet every day with a smile．Tomorrow is another day．