Question

農(nóng)歷新年將至，你的班級將在學期結(jié)束之際舉行一個新年派對。請寫一篇英語短文在你的博客上介紹這次派對的一些情況。你的文章應該包含以下要點：
派對的準備情況 （購買氣球、彩帶裝飾班級，準備禮物）。
派對的內(nèi)容 （互換新年禮物, 表達新年祝福, 進行表演、游戲等活動）。
你準備的禮物與你期待收到的禮物。
注意：1．可以適當組合要點，適當刪減或添加信息以使文章流暢。
2．必須使用至少一個定語從句，一個被動語態(tài)。
3．詞數(shù)100左右。段落開頭語已為你寫好。
參考詞匯:  balloon (氣球)，  ribbon (彩帶)，  exchange (交換)
The Lunar New Year is drawing near. At the end of this term, my class will have a party.
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Answer 1

The Lunar New Year is drawing near. At the end of this term, my class will have a party. The classroom has been decorated with colorful ribbons and balloons ahead of time. We are all very excited about the party, at which we will exchange gifts, make New Year wishes, put on performances as well as play games. It’s great fun receiving a gift from someone else and we all want to give a gift to make the receiver feel special.
I have had my gift ready. I prepared a notebook ,which is very special because there are many beautiful poems on its papers. I copied a piece of Tagore’s work on the first paper, which expresses my best wishes to the receiver. I hope I can get a cup which I have always longed for. I can hardly wait for the party and I am sure we will have a wonderful time then.

解析試題分析：本文是一篇提綱類書面表達。主要是介紹新年派對派對的一些情況。包括準備情況和內(nèi)容及收送禮物情況。本文要點提示較多，內(nèi)容只要根據(jù)要點適當刪減或添加信息就可以了。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意按要求必須使用至少一個定語從句，一個被動語態(tài)，詞數(shù)100左右。
考點：提綱類書面表達。
點評：提綱類書面表達主要特點是：要點明確，范圍具體，貼近生活，易于動筆。此類試題中有較多的文字說明，實際上規(guī)定了考生表述的思路，對考生的寫作范圍作了較為明確的限定，試題中規(guī)定的要點一個也不能回避。考生極易受中文提綱的制約，將書面表達變成了翻譯，造成語法結(jié)構(gòu)和語匯上的單調(diào)，因此平時要多練習，活用語言，使文章流暢。