Question

書面表達（滿分25分）
假設你是李華，你的美國筆友Steven 即將來北京學習漢語，發(fā)郵件請你給他介紹一本學習漢語口語的書，你覺得網(wǎng)上熱銷的《漢語會話常用語》(《Expressions in Chinese Conversation》)適合他。請根據(jù)提示，并增加必要信息，給他回復郵件

定價	內 容	形 式	如何得到
15元	準確,豐富,適合初學者	配有磁帶,適合自學	(自擬)

詞數(shù)：110左右；開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)
Dear Steven,
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Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Steven,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing to learn Chinese.
There are many books intended for foreigners who learn Chinese, of which I think Expressions in Chinese Conversation is a better choice. This book has been a best seller on the Internet in recent years. Most readers are satisfied with its accurate language and abundant contents. Besides, the book is quite suitable for beginners because it starts from the very beginning. What’s more, it’s convenient for you to learn by yourself with the tape contained in it.
If you’re interested in it, you can buy it via the Internet for 15 yuan. It’s also available in local bookstores in Beijing. Please contact me if you have any difficulty in finding the book.
Wish you a nice time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua

解析這是一封回信，第一段問候之后，第二段就要解答對方的問題，這里是要詢問適合學習漢語的書，文章里應該有建議和建議的理由。There are many books intended for foreigners who learn Chinese, of which I think Expressions in Chinese Conversation is a better choice.這句話里很恰當?shù)挠靡痪浞窍拗菩远ㄕZ從句，這段里共給了四個理由，值得注意的是在四個理由鏈接的時候，作者用了：besides，what’s more使得句與句很連貫。文章第三段里給出購買的方式和途徑，并提供必要的幫助。
文章在遣詞造句方面也動了腦筋，用了一些高級詞匯和短語，如：are satisfied with 、accurate language and abundant contents 、is quite suitable for 、it’s convenient for you to learn、 if you have any difficulty in finding the book這些短語的使用都體現(xiàn)作者熟練使用所學知識的能力。