Question

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請(qǐng)從這則寓言中提煉出一個(gè)恰當(dāng)?shù)闹黝}，寫一篇不少于120詞的讀后感．內(nèi)容包括：
1．簡(jiǎn)要概括這則寓言；
2．談?wù)勀愕睦斫饣蚋惺埽?br />3．以你或你身邊的人或事加以論證．
【注意】
1．不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱，否則記"零"分．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
If the peacock had realized this，she would not have been so upset，then would have shown her beautiful figures and been proud of herself
如果孔雀意識(shí)到了這一點(diǎn)，她就不會(huì)那么傷心了，那么她就會(huì)表現(xiàn)出她美麗的身材，為自己感到驕傲．
高分句型二：
Never will he know how we admire him!In fact nobody can develop very well in all aspects even if he/she is a talent．
永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)他知道如何欣賞他！事實(shí)上沒(méi)有人可以發(fā)展得很好的各個(gè)方面即使他/她是一個(gè)人才．

解答 The fable is about a peacock who complains about her ugly voice ignoring her true beauty．But a fox advises her to be content with what she owns．
    After reading it I understand that we teenagers should find and make good use of our advantages，stopping complaining the shortcomings all the time．If the peacock had realized this，she would not have been so upset，then would have shown her beautiful figures and been proud of herself（高分句型一）．
    Many people around me make the same mistake，who only focus on what they cannot get．Take my friend Mike as an example．He does very well in all subjects，ranking as Top 10 in most of the exams．But he usually complains that he can't play basketball well because he is not tall enough．Never will he know how we admire him!In fact nobody can develop very well in all aspects even if he/she is a talent（高分句型二）．So we should stay positive and value what vvc have instead of complaining too much．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．