Question

針對(duì)目前高三學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)壓力較大的現(xiàn)狀，有人以“Effective Ways to Release the Stress”為題于上周調(diào)查采訪了五個(gè)學(xué)校的500名高三學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下調(diào)查結(jié)果的圖表寫(xiě)一份報(bào)告，并再談?wù)勛约夯蛏磉呁瑢W(xué)釋放壓力的有效方法。

注意：1.詞數(shù)：120左右；

      2.調(diào)查報(bào)告的題目和開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好(不記入總詞數(shù))。

      3.參考詞匯：心理咨詢室the psychological consulting office

Answer 1

Effective Ways to Release the Stress

Nowadays more and more senior three students are getting stressed in their studies．In order to find out effective ways to release the stress，a survey was made last week in five schools．Altogether 500 students were interviewed，and some if interesting results were as follows：About thirty-five percent of the students let out their stress by doing sports．They play football，for instance．Meanwhile，another forty—five percent of them release their stress by listening to different kinds of music．Interestingly，the rest twenty percent of them usually get help from the school psychological consulting office．

When I’m stressed，I usually do lots of weightlifting to get myself tired．Then I’ll have a good sleep．In this way，I’ll feel relaxed and forget all about my worries．

解析:

根據(jù)圖畫(huà)將文章的要點(diǎn)概括完整，內(nèi)容充實(shí)而豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，有層次感；要用詞十分恰當(dāng)，段落過(guò)渡自然。寫(xiě)出內(nèi)涵意思，本文最大的特點(diǎn)就是想象力十分豐富，文章要有血有肉，無(wú)論是長(zhǎng)短句的搭配，還是從句的使用，都要做到恰當(dāng)。