Question

假如你是李華，某校高三年級(jí)學(xué)生，你想給曾經(jīng)教過你的外教Alan寫一封郵件請(qǐng)教在英語學(xué)習(xí)上遇到的一些問題。主要內(nèi)容包括：

英語成績不理想；?? 2。恐難進(jìn)心儀大學(xué)；3。花時(shí)多，收效少

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要求：1. 不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，行文通暢；2. 詞數(shù)：120左右

Dear Alan,

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Best wishes

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Alan,

Recently I’m faced with some difficulty in learning English which has been bothering me continuously. Hardly have I seen any progress in my English study even though I have spent quite a lot of time in English every day. No matter how hard I try, I would never get good results in the exams. I began to realize how serious the situation would be. I feel so worried that I always blame myself for it. To improve the situation, I have discussed it with some of my teachers and classmates. They have done their best to help me, but I am still not confident. Nowadays, it has even become such a headache for me that being admitted to my dream university seems impossible. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice. Thank you.

Best wishes,

Yours, sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是書信類作文，你的外教Alan寫一封郵件請(qǐng)教在英語學(xué)習(xí)上遇到的一些問題。文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來了，但是不是很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。而且要適當(dāng)拓展，豐富內(nèi)容，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】所給范文語言流暢，句式變化多樣：Recently I’m faced with some difficulty in learning English which has been bothering me continuously. 這句話用了定語從句。Hardly have I seen any progress in my English study even though I have spent quite a lot of time in English every day.這句話用了倒裝句， No matter how hard I try, I would never get good results in the exams. 這句話用了讓步狀語從句， I feel so worried that I always blame myself for it. 這句話用了so…that…句型，To improve the situation, I have discussed it with some of my teachers and classmates. 這句話用了不定式做目的狀語， Nowadays, it has even become such a headache for me that being admitted to my dream university seems impossible.這句話用了it做形式主語， I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice. 這句話用了it做形式賓語。

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