Question

某英文報正在就建立良好的師生關(guān)系進(jìn)行討論。你作為一名中學(xué)生，請參與討論。請你圍繞 “A good relationship benefits us all” 這個話題，根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語寫一篇100-120個詞的短文。
你的文章必須包括下列要點(diǎn)：
1．建立良好的師生關(guān)系的必要性；
2．你認(rèn)為良好的師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該怎樣的；
3．如何才能建立這種關(guān)系。
注意: 開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
A good relationship benefits us all
As a middle school student, I think it necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers，
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Answer 1

A good relationship benefits us all
As a middle school student，I think it necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers，for it is the teachers who show love and concern for us students in study and life．We students can always seek support and advice from them，from which we benefit and learn a great deal．
In this case, an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important．In my opinion，this relationship should be one filled with love，care，understanding, and respect, so we can exchange ideas freely．To build a relationship of this kind, teachers should become our friends while we students ought to trust teachers and express our feelings frankly．Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a warm relationship between teachers and students, and live a happy and harmonious life．

解析試題分析：本文屬于提綱類短文，文章的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來，考生不需要去組織。只需要翻譯即可，關(guān)鍵在于使用合適的連接詞for instance, In this case , In my opinion，等。同時要注意使用高級句型和高級短語，如倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句等多種句式讓文章充滿變化，更有檔次。We students can always seek support and advice from them，from which we benefit and learn a great deal．這句話是非限制性定語從句，Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a warm relationship between teachers and students, and live a happy and harmonious life．這句話是倒裝句。
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類短文寫作
點(diǎn)評：提綱類短文的寫作關(guān)鍵在于涵蓋所有的要點(diǎn)，不要有任何的遺漏和省略，在寫作的時候注意使用高級的詞組和句型，讓文章更有文采和檔次。