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2．假如你是李華，最近收到了你的美國(guó)朋友Jenny的來(lái)信．她在信中說(shuō)，由于剛進(jìn)入高中，還不能適應(yīng)新環(huán)境，不知道如何去結(jié)交新朋友，因而情緒低落．請(qǐng)你給她回信，內(nèi)容如下：
（1）向Jenny表示問(wèn)候和安慰（你的同學(xué)和你面臨同樣的問(wèn)題，所以不必過(guò)于擔(dān)心）；
（2）針對(duì)她的問(wèn)題提出以下建議：
①放學(xué)后邀請(qǐng)同學(xué)一起參加活動(dòng)，這有助于你們互相更好地了解；
②你的同學(xué)遇到麻煩時(shí)，你去幫助他們；
③你遇到困難時(shí)向同學(xué)求助．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)100左右；
（2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：參加take part in
Dear Jenny，I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school．You should remember that your classmates are also new there and facing the same problem，so you don't have to worry too much about it．（高分句型一）There is also something that you can do to change this situation．（高分句型二）First，try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school．This will help you understand each other better by communicating with others．Then，help others when they are in trouble，and ask them to help you when you have difficulty．（高分句型三）Soon，I believe，you will make many new friends there．
Bestwishes，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 假如你是李華，最近收到了你的美國(guó)朋友Jenny的來(lái)信．她在信中說(shuō)，由于剛進(jìn)入高中，還不能適應(yīng)新環(huán)境，不知道如何去結(jié)交新朋友，因而情緒低落．請(qǐng)你給她回信，內(nèi)容如下：1．向Jenny表示問(wèn)候和安慰（你的同學(xué)和你面臨同樣的問(wèn)題，所以不必過(guò)于擔(dān)心）；2．針對(duì)她的問(wèn)題提出以下建議：（1）放學(xué)后邀請(qǐng)同學(xué)一起參加活動(dòng)，這有助于你們互相更好地了解；（2）你的同學(xué)遇到麻煩時(shí)，你去幫助他們；（3）你遇到困難時(shí)向同學(xué)求助．語(yǔ)句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】There is also something that you can do to change this situation．運(yùn)用定語(yǔ)從句；This will help you understand each other better by communicating with others．運(yùn)用比較級(jí)；Then，help others when they are in trouble，and ask them to help you when you have difficulty．運(yùn)用時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；You should remember that your classmates are also new there and facing the same problem，so you don't have to worry too much about it．此句式為文章增色，顯得文章很有檔次．
You should remember that your classmates are also new there and facing the same problem，so you don't have to worry too much about it．（高分句型一）There is also something that you can do to change this situation．（高分句型二）
Then，help others when they are in trouble，and ask them to help you when you have difficulty．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jenny，
       I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school．You should remember that your classmates are also new there and facing the same problem，so you don't have to worry too much about it．（高分句型一）There is also something that you can do to change this situation．（高分句型二）First，try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school．This will help you understand each other better by communicating with others．Then，help others when they are in trouble，and ask them to help you when you have difficulty．（高分句型三）Soon，I believe，you will make many new friends there．
                                                                                                                                                                                       Best wishes，
                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．