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假如你是Daniel，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一份電子郵件給報(bào)社，提出環(huán)保倡議。請(qǐng)根據(jù)中文提示，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于80詞的短文。第五個(gè)要點(diǎn)根據(jù)主題用1-2句話自由發(fā)揮。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。
1. 今年春天中國政府下定決心治理污染，使天變藍(lán)，水變綠；
2. 我覺得最嚴(yán)重的問題是空氣污染，空氣污染導(dǎo)致了許多健康問題；
3. 我們要少開車，可以騎自行車外出，自行車不產(chǎn)生空氣污染；
4. 要多種樹，樹能夠使空氣清潔；
5. 我覺得……
Dear editor,
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I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Best wishes!
Daniel

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear editor,
This spring, the Chinese government has decided to solve the pollution problems so that we can have blue sky and green water. I think the most serious problem today is air pollution. It has caused a lot of health problems. We should drive cars out less. We can ride a bike instead because bikes produce no air pollution. We should plant more trees. Trees can help to make our air clean. I think we should try to use clean energy. It’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment.
I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Best wishes!
Daniel

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要仔細(xì)考慮，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文主要使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)等時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，可以使用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should來提出建議。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文多次使用帶賓語從句的主從復(fù)合句，以及由so that、because引導(dǎo)的狀語從句，這些都為文章增色不少。