Question

今天是父親節(jié)。假定你是李華，請(qǐng)給你的美國(guó)朋友John寫一封電子郵件，談?wù)勀銓⑷绾闻c父親一起度過(guò)這個(gè)特別的日子。要點(diǎn)如下：

●表述你與父親間的情感；

●為父親制作二張卡片；

●幫助父親做點(diǎn)事；

●陪父親散步等。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)80-100；

2．請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3．郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear John,

It's Father's Day today. It's a special day, isn't it? __________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________

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What' your plan for Father's Day? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear John,

    It's Father's Day today. It's a special day, isn't it?

    I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me.

    Today I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening. Besides, I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. I' m sure he'll be very happy.

    What's your plan for Father's Day? I' m looking forward to hearing from yon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一封電子郵件，介紹如何與父親一起度過(guò)父親節(jié)。材料中給的資料比較全面，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。