Question

根據(jù)以下信息，以My New Classmate為題寫一篇短文，介紹一下Nick吧。

Name	Nick
Age（年齡）	13
From	England
Class	Class 5, Grade 7
Look（相貌）	tall, strong, hair, long, yellow face, round eyes, big mouth, small
Clothes	yellow shirt green pants brown shoes

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

My new classmate

Today we are very glad to have a new friend. He is a boy. He is called Nick. He is 13 years old. He is from England. He is tall and strong. His hair is long and yellow. He has a round face and big eyes.His mouth is very small. He wears a yellow shirt and green shoes.His shoes are brown. Now we are in the same class, Class 5 Grade 7.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文是一篇提綱作文，要求寫作的內(nèi)容是介紹一個(gè)新的同學(xué)。新同學(xué)的信息已經(jīng)全部給出。 考生需要做的就是把這些信息整合到一起，組成一篇完整的文章。此話題正是初一年級(jí)重點(diǎn)話題。可以用到所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)和句式。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】例文成功地把所給的信息整合成一篇完整的文章。并不是逐條編寫句子。在順序上也做了一定的調(diào)整，使文章更加自然。用到了初中一年級(jí)所要求掌握的短語(yǔ)及句式，比如be called, come from, has a round face等等。描寫準(zhǔn)確而全面。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文