Question

9．根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯，不少于60詞的文段．請將文段寫在答題卡上．
某英文報紙就中學生帶手機（cell phones）上學話題征文，請你投稿．
手機在人們生活中扮演著重要角色，許多同學帶手機上學．請你談談同學們經(jīng)常用手機做什么，你有什么體會，你對正確使用手機有哪些建議．
daily life，convenient，keep in touch，pass notes，during the class，affect．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
More and more children bring their phones to school越來越多的學生帶手機上學．
比較級+and+比較級 越來越…
【高分句型二】
Some people think①②it's convenient for students to keep in touch with their parents，so schools should allow students to take cell phones to school．一些人認為對于學生來說和父母保持聯(lián)系是很方便的，所以學校應該允許學生帶手機上學．
①think后是省略that的賓語從句．
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．

解答 Cell phones are very important in our daily life．More and more children bring their phones to school．【高分句型一】At school，students use cell phones to pass notes，read novels and listen to music．Sometimes cell phones ring during the class．Some people think it's convenient for students to keep in touch with their parents，so schools should allow students to take cell phones to school．【高分句型二】（同學們經(jīng)常用手機做什么）In my opinion，with a cell phone to school will affect the student's attention，students shouldn't bring cell phones to school．They should focus on the lessons and other activities in the school．（體會和建議）

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