Question

現(xiàn)如今，社會(huì)各個(gè)方面都在改革，當(dāng)然英語(yǔ)學(xué)科也不例外。好多人認(rèn)為等工作以后英語(yǔ)基本上都用不上了，所以，我們就不應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)了。而有的人則認(rèn)為，當(dāng)今社會(huì)快速發(fā)展，全球一體化更是大勢(shì)所趨，所以，英語(yǔ)作為一個(gè)工具不可缺少。你認(rèn)為中學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)英語(yǔ)嗎？請(qǐng)以此為話(huà)題寫(xiě)一篇文章。
要求：
觀(guān)點(diǎn)明確；
卷面整潔；
語(yǔ)言?xún)?yōu)美，沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

Answer 1

Nowdays, all aspect in society has changed , English is no exception. Many people think that  English has not been used widely, so we should not learn English.
Others think that English is one of the most common languages that are speaking in the world. According to the research, there is nearly one person in every ten people can speak English. We need to learn English because as our country's economy's develops, there are more and more opportunities for us to visit other countries. If we want to communicate with foreigners who don't know how to speak Chinese, we need to speak English. It's important for us to learn English because we want to learn other people's technologies and cultures, therefore we can improve our knowledge.
In my opinion , learning English is necessary, no matter what happens.

試題分析：本文是提綱類(lèi)作文，話(huà)題是大家熟悉的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)，學(xué)生們有話(huà)可說(shuō)，而且文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，但只是一個(gè)提綱，考生還需要做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中運(yùn)用一些比較常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)learn English學(xué)英語(yǔ)  communicate with 與某人交流，It's important for us to do ，做某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)是非常重要的。Others think that English is one of the most common languages that are speaking in the world這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用賓語(yǔ)從句，one of +名詞復(fù)數(shù)，that are speaking in the world是languages的定語(yǔ)從句。It's important for us to learn English because we want to learn other people's technologies and cultures, therefore we can improve our knowledge這個(gè)句子用because來(lái)連接，還運(yùn)用therefore表示結(jié)果，很好提高文章的檔次。