Question

請(qǐng)你以“My spare time “ 為題，描述自己的課余生活。要求60-----80個(gè)單詞。
提示詞；be interested in ; be good at , be busy with ,weekends ,enjoy ,like, spend  --in

Answer 1

I’m interested in playing computer games .I’m good at swimming and playing basketball , but I have no time .From Monday to Friday ,I am busy with my study and do much homework both in the daytime and in the evening .So I have my spare time only on weekends . In the afternoon, I usually spend most of time in playing with my friends . Sometimes I help my parents with housework. In the evening, I often go to moves, My favourite moves are Superman and Spiderman, I want to be a hero to help people in the future .

試題分析：本文的題目是my spare time，介紹自己的課余生活，也就是介紹學(xué)習(xí)之外從事的活動(dòng)，范圍比較廣泛。書寫時(shí)，注意根據(jù)時(shí)間來(lái)安排課余活動(dòng)，不要用排比性的句型泛泛談?wù)�，要切中主題。書寫時(shí)，要注意人稱應(yīng)該用第一人稱，而時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。還應(yīng)該注意連詞的應(yīng)用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本書面表達(dá)書寫能按照時(shí)間的順序來(lái)安排，使得整篇文章比較有條理，思路也很清晰。文中能正確運(yùn)用所給的提示詞，并且，書寫時(shí)注意了，句子之間的銜接，運(yùn)用了一些必要的連詞如but、so等。一些句型運(yùn)用的也很到位，如 My favourite moves are Superman and Spiderman, I want to be a hero to help people in the future 等這些都為文章添色不少。