Question

某英文報紙就家務勞動（Housework）話題征文，請你投稿。

每個家庭都有許多家務，人人都應該學做一些。談談你經(jīng)常幫父母做哪些家務，有什么體會，并打算在暑假為家里做什么。

提示詞語：every family，lots of housework，learn to do，help，parents，be/feel proud of

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Every family has lots of housework. Everyone should learn to do some of it. I often help my parents do housework such as washing clothes，cleaning the room and watering flowers.

????????????? I think I’ve learned how to take good care of myself and my family by doing housework. Sometimes cleaning all the windows is an enjoyable experience. I really feel proud of myself. And doing housework is also a kind of exercise.

????????????? The summer holiday is coming. I’m going to learn how to cook some dishes. My parents will be happy to enjoy them.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語help sb to do 幫助某人做某事；such as 比如；take good care of照顧某人； doing housework做家務；be proud of以，，為豪。 I often help my parents do housework such as washing clothes，cleaning the room and watering flowers.在這個句子中運用such as ,washing,cleaning and watering是三個并列的動詞，形式保持一致。Sometimes cleaning all the windows is an enjoyable experience.這個句子中動名詞做主語。

考點： 提綱類作文。