Question

最近，你校準(zhǔn)備就“家務(wù)勞動（housework）”這個話題進(jìn)行征文比賽，你打算投稿，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文。
（1）表明自己的觀點：應(yīng)該做家務(wù)；
（2）列舉自己做的家務(wù)；
（3）做家務(wù)的感受或體會（至少三點）；
（4）你打算假期為家里做什么？
注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右（文章的開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）
2. 不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。
Every family has lots of housework..                                                                                         
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Answer 1

Every family has lots of homework. Though we are busy with our study, we should learn to do some of it. I often help my parents do housework such as washing clothes, cleaning the room and watering flowers.
I think I’ve learned how to take good care of myself and my family by doing housework. Sometimes cleaning all the windows is an enjoyable experience. I really feel proud of myself. And doing housework is also a kind of exercise.
Summer holiday is coming. I’m going to learn how to cook some dishes. My parents will be happy to enjoy them.

解析試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
考點：提綱類作文
點評:該題型主要考查學(xué)生的語言表達(dá)能力，在寫作中根據(jù)所給提示和語言信息，不遺漏要點，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。做到表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫