Question

假如你叫大明，收到了你的英國(guó)朋友Tony的來(lái)信，信中他很關(guān)心四川雅安地震后學(xué)生的情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他的來(lái)信內(nèi)容寫一封回信，感謝他對(duì)災(zāi)區(qū)學(xué)生的關(guān)心，回答他的問題，并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?br />提示詞語(yǔ)：thank you, care to， go on， government ，offer，encourage， brave　
Dear Daming,
I’m sorry to hear that a big earthquake happened in Ya’an, Sichuan. Some school buildings broke down in the earthquake and many students couldn’t go to school. But I know the government is trying their best to help them. And Chinese people are so strong and brave that they aren’t afraid of anything difficult. Can the students go on studying now? Please tell me more about them.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours, 
Tony
Dear Tony,
I’m glad to hear from you.                                         
                                                                                 
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                              
Best wishes.  
Yours
Daming

Answer 1

Dear Tony,
I’m very glad to hear from you.
Thank you so much for your care to the students in Ya’an, Sichuan. Yes, the students can go on studying now. It’s true that many students couldn’t go to school at that time. But as quickly as possible, the government helped them find new places to go on studying. And many people also offer them lots of help and encourage them to be strong and brave. I think they are not alone. China is a big family and love is just around them.
Best wishes.                                              
Yours
Daming

試題分析：本書面表達(dá)是一封回信，由于有來(lái)信，所以應(yīng)該仔細(xì)閱讀來(lái)信中的內(nèi)容，弄清對(duì)方問的問題是什么，在進(jìn)行回答。首先應(yīng)該表示感謝，然后主要應(yīng)該介紹現(xiàn)在學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況，以及對(duì)將來(lái)的設(shè)想。書寫時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)和人稱的運(yùn)用。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)時(shí)，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫好后多讀多修改